Planning for production - Discussion We Had In Class

Yesterday in class we received back our first draft of our screenplay with suggestions on how we could improve it by Mr. Rosen. He said that although it was very strong, we still need to make sure this theme of Success vs. Failure is highlighted in the screenplay as at the moment it seems to be getting a little bit lost, he also maintained the use of Todorov's narrative theory in order to give our trailer more structure as at the moment it we're jumping back and forward too much which might confused audiences.